Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore students should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?
It is claimed by many that schools should not spend their vital time on educate Students about physical eduaction, as their parents should be make sure for it. I believed
that both teachers and parents should teach together to keep children healthy
On the one hand. It is responsible of parents to take care of their students health. Firstly, they should be a first teacher in their child's life, which lead to their Children have a mirror to focus. So that the parents should spend more time with them. Such as
exercise with their children or teach soft skills. As a result, their children would have body full of energy and alway ready to do what they want which lead to
and healthily person to be assist their family and their country.
On the other hand, Student's spend the majority of their time in School. the filst measure is for the school to makin Sports as part of School Subjects which
lead to their students Could relieve the stress. For example, Alter hours of studying, physical education class is a place for them to release energy which might help them focus more on that lessons and help them learn with ease. The second benefit, is
growing connection with friends. For instance, when Students learn gymastics who could play together. As a result, Child's relationship would develop in positive way.
In conclusion, I would argue that in order to keepthe children fit and healthy, both the parents as well as school work hand in hand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...l eduaction, as their parents should be make sure for it. I believed that both teac...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their Children have a mirror to focus. So that the parents should spend more time with...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...d the majority of their time in School. the filst measure is for the school to maki...
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Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ldren fit and healthy, both the parents as well as school work hand in hand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77559055118 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2375266508 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8189669216 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262639067825 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930619163439 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607708074398 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115575723398 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728685125699 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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