Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore students should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?
Children need to be physically active and fit to ensure that their biological growth is normal at all times and the onus of this should lie with their parents and not with schools. These educational institutions should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as a part of the curriculum. I completely disagree with this idea and I will explain why.
There are various reasons to prove the importance of having physical training lessons as part of the curriculum. Firstly, schools should provide sports coaching as part of the syllabus because it will imbibe a competitive attitude in students not only for sports but also for other subjects. Besides, it will help them learn team management skills at a young age and it will be advantageous for them in the long run. For instance, sports day in schools creates huge excitement among pupils because they compete with one another and prove their courage. Secondly, the result of any physical workout can be more productive when that workout is conducted with peers of the same age group. This is because children normally like to participate in physical activities in groups rather than performing any of such activities alone. For example, while running, children who participate, tend to find more motivation to run faster, when they are competing with their school friends of the same age group. Therefore, school is the best place to conduct exercises for children as it can get more participants of the same age group to perform any physical activity.
However, I do appreciate that some people think differently, say the physical fitness of children is a sole responsibility of parents. In fact, juveniles can be supervised by their parents in a facile manner unlike at schools where it is not possible to provide individual attention to each student. For example, if a child is interested in any type of sports such as cricket, parents play a crucial role in encouraging their child and ensuring that his interest is pursued. As a result, children will feel motivated to follow their passion and be physically fit.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable parents are responsible for their children’s physical development, I believe that school is the best place for youngsters to find more motivation to complete physical tasks for the reasons mentioned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
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Message: Consider replacing "in a facile manner" with adverb for "facile"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...iles can be supervised by their parents in a facile manner unlike at schools where it is not possi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08355091384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80299823017 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516971279373 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0753880079 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6875 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289239711599 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104908135614 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970899256911 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185966780591 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731185664561 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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