Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
I believe that pollution especially air and water from factories and daily activities. Therefore, each person and government should respond to this phenomenon.
The two main factors behind pollution are contaminated air and dirty water. Concerning the former, factories add air pollution to the atmosphere and many different gases. Some of those gases increase the risk of serious heart and lung diseases. These substances also destroy the ozone layer which contributes to climate warming. The second point is that unsolved water flows to the river, or direct water sources for people around there. If those factories do not have solutions, it could cause pollution, especially water pollution.
Both individuals and the government should be responsible for these damages. Obviously, the government could have the right policies and finance’s punishments. Furthermore, schools need to add one or two class periods about environmental protection of knowledge. Last but not least, each person should be known to reduce pollution in many ways. For example, households could use eco-packages which are things made from environmentally friendly materials instead of plastic ones on a daily basis. Not only households, other people may grow trees on the rooftop like a habit in their free time. The advantages of these activities will contribute to a large amount of good impact in the long term.
To conclude, abuse of the environment comes from lots of factors, such as air and water pollution. Therefore, everyone ought to make this problem shared and it would be a problem halved for better lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...add air pollution to the atmosphere and many different gases. Some of those gases increase the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87135738766 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1601868807 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809221222257 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242777850487 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291377746732 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499933959441 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274175076418 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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