Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem and what can we do to prevent it?
The natural surrounding which is known as the environment is currently facing some issues with a grave significance. These obstacles are rooted in a diversity of reasons and some potential solutions are proposed as well.
Surprising, though, it might seem to be, the main causes are human based. War as an elemental key totally destroys everything including plants, animals' habitats and etc. It can even alter the geography of a land by changing the natural dimensions such as removing the hills or modifying the typical direction of a river flow to a wrong side. Global warming, mainly caused by greenhouse gases, is the other rationale behind this issue which should not sink into oblivion. The aforementioned gases negatively affect the environment by inclining the weather temperature. Consequently, this leads to an increase in the level of the seas and results in a catastrophe later.
Trying to come up with a number of strategies to solve the environmental obstacles requisites to be done at the scale of officialdoms, To be more precise, the officials trying to find a solution for the environmental crisis, require to set some strict restrictions against both companies and individuals to mitigate the damages. To clarify, the aristocratic owners of the factories which negatively affects the environment should be obliged to face justice. Moreover, some surveillance cameras are better to be installed in jungles to fully monitor hunters and preserve every single species from the possible prills. The other remedy which is even considered more practical is the deployment of education. Agreeing broadly with this concept, I fully support the theory of education based policies. Media can be widely utilized to broadcast the environmental ideas among lay people and this can blossom into a more prosperous society in term of the environment.
As a way of conclusion, there are various reasons for the environmental issues and of course some policies to cope with the problems as well, but the point is that there is no absolute panacea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'setting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: setting
...n for the environmental crisis, require to set some strict restrictions against both c...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is that there is no absolute panacea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02324177288 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6351270696 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114074858004 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321894619903 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399900684829 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616889329667 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036474798899 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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