A considerable quantity of individuals have an inclination to save their income rather than spending it. I really believe that this conditionally depends on the fiscal status of the country.
Difficult, though, it might seem to be, some people just attempt to cut the corners and keep the money they earn for a diversity of reasons. With the advancement of technology, folks are more likely to visit different countries and be introduced to the novel cultures instead of the domestic journeys. According to MNY(National University of Malaysia), in the vicinity of 80 percent of youths in newly developed countries fully expressed that traveling abroad is what they have chosen to do in their free time.
Being financially prepared in cases of emergencies and fully supported regarding capital resources is also has to be shed light on. To clarify, a sudden disease requisite a considerable amount of money regardless of the other dimensions it might have. In this case what people, usually, if not always, do is to put some money aside for critical crisis so that they can tackle the issue,Moreover,this is mostly about fathers who feel like they are responsible for the future of tall family members and sense of moral obligation and love they have toward the others .
In general,saving adequate fiscal resources,while seriously common,is a disputable topic that has drawn pundits' attention. Saving money is a prosperous strategy to be well prepared for a brighter future, but in some circumstances, it would be such a colossal waste of cash as these countries, for instance, Iran are suffering from high inflation and the other economical obstacles such embezzlement. This means that under no circumstances should they save a significant amount of money as the currency may lose its power steadily.
As a way of conclusion, there are various attitudes toward whether it is an appropriate strategy to save budget or not and there are, of course, some factors as well, And the point that saving is not always the best choice to make should not be abandoned.
- The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not. 78
- The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 68
- Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? 89
- Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 54
- Environmental degradation is a major world problem What causes this problem and what can we do to prevent it 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Moreover
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , saving
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Suggestion: , while
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Suggestion: , is
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pundits'' or 'pundit's'?
Suggestion: pundits'; pundit's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in general, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07669616519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02465503195 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1880822579 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167149466697 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571847488394 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465560392866 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903826650147 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309494931245 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.