The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the bar chart reveals the percentage of various Australians visited zoo, library, theatre, and cinema.
Ostensibly, the new migrants born in English-speaking territories have visited zoo 10 percent more than the people born in Australia and 23 percent more than the new migrants born in other countries. Moreover, the statistics indicate that cinema was the most popular location visited by diverse individuals. Surprisingly, the theatre was the place which was almost rarely visited by folks. The indices for people born in Australia and the new migrants born in other countries are 20 percent and 10 percent, respectively. In addition, the rate for the new migrants born in other countries who visited the zoo is approximately double compared to those who chose theatre to visit. Noticeably, only 20 percent of people who were born in Australia visited library whilst the percentage for the similar range of visitors for cinema was three times more.
Overall, the information exposes the distinctive locations visited by different residents of Australia
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-05-08 | tr_h.20 | 84 | view |
| 2023-10-08 | RIYA MODI | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-16 | baotrammm | 60 | view |
| 2023-07-15 | kien150199 | view | |
| 2023-07-15 | ililmaidatuz | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44047619048 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94389621816 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8908864084 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138547531478 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075194085117 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431824927252 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117458472318 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493708530409 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.