Environmental problems are too big for idividual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment to address at the international level.
It is hard for individual country and individual people to solve environmental problem. So, the only solution in order to protect our environment is bring it to international level. I do agree with the statement regarding these several reasons.
Earth is not only belong to individual, but also it belongs to earth inhabitants. It means that the earth dwellers has the same responsibilty to tackle the environtmental. Moreover, solving a problem with individually will not give a significat effects. To Hadle this issue we need to cooperate with others, so it brings a significat effect. Thus, to tackle environmental issue, we need to do a team work with other nation.
Furthermore, environmental problem is multi sectoral problem which bring a domino effect. For instance, forest fire will increase the earth temperature and it will lead to the melt of the glaciers. So, People or country could not solve it by their own. To take account for forest fire for example, a country which has a wide area of forest should be helped by other country. One of the best way to lend a hand is to give them donation. The aid is given to streghten the prevention act of the country. This act should be socialized in international forum, such as in UN meeting. Thus , all of the countries can make their contribution.
To sum up, environmental issues is multi sectoral problem, so, it requires a teamwork from country across the globe. I belive that making this issue as international problem is the only way to deal with environmental problem.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
... in order to protect our environment is bring it to international level. I do agree w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ional forum, such as in UN meeting. Thus , all of the countries can make their con...
^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...al forum, such as in UN meeting. Thus , all of the countries can make their contribution. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...amwork from country across the globe. I belive that making this issue as international prob...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91153846154 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0330456367 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5533458347 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9444444444 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249693996042 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761171592449 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771810093811 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171610249763 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790692499496 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
... in order to protect our environment is bring it to international level. I do agree w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ional forum, such as in UN meeting. Thus , all of the countries can make their con...
^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...al forum, such as in UN meeting. Thus , all of the countries can make their contribution. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...amwork from country across the globe. I belive that making this issue as international prob...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91153846154 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0330456367 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5533458347 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9444444444 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249693996042 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761171592449 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771810093811 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171610249763 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790692499496 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.