Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. Do u agree or disagree?
Globally, environmental degradation has been recognized as one of the main challenges that people have to overcome in the 21st century. The rapid deterioration of the environment is believed to impose a severe threat on people’s survival in the years ahead. Some ideas have been indicated that tackling the environmental problem needs international aids. From my point of view, I completely agree with this issue.
The first point to support the international cooperation is that the impact of the environmental problems can be on the global scale. As can easily be seen that the interaction of ecosystems and the transport of pollutants and agricultural chemicals are the main characteristics of the world. For example, in Asia, some neighbor countries of Vietnam such as China, from time to time, share the same environmental problems with Vietnam, which stems from some lakes or factories of China with a huge amount of pollutants without being treated. Another example is that, Amazon forest is the largest one which goes through nine countries in the South America and it has also been being threatened by people’s activities. When this huge forest is polluted, it means that not only in some countries in the South America but in everywhere around the world will be influenced negatively by its impacts from pollution. As a result, international aids seem to be a must for every countries.
Apart from the general environmental problems around the world, another benefit from the international aids is that they create more and more stable and crucial relationships among countries. In fact, of course, developing countries should received the support from other wealthy countries in some fields, especially when it comes to the environment. We all know that almost environmental issues stem from developing nations in which agricultural, water and air systems have already been fogy. Therefore, they really need the support from the global community, especially some industrialize nations as the United State that have achieved remarkable progress in this field. By sharing experiences in the environmental management, countries can tackle problems with better efficiency.
In conclusion, cooperation between countries plays a tremendous role to the environmental problems. By shaking hands with each other, countries are able to protect the environment effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to protect the environment effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49051490515 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15945694203 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539295392954 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1095203838 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.176470588 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182353805491 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651949712284 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308138411157 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121780440746 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190238746981 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.