Some people say that teaching local history to school children is more important than teaching world history to them. Do you agree or disagree?
there is little room for doubt that tourism is one of the fastest-growing industries in the world. However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debate. some people feel that tourism could ruin culture while others argue that it protects culture. From my perspective, I think it has both merits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, some people consider tourism only brings detrimental effects. first and foremost, the building of facilities and infrastructure to earn tourism revenue can destroy the local habitat and culture. For example, Thailand people regularly migrate to various locations because there is a huge number of visitors who do not obey the rules and regulations of their culture, such as using electronic devices which are not allowed to some areas. Moreover, tourism creates pollution and waste which deteriorate the local resources.
However, on the other hand, apart from some drawbacks brought by tourism, some benefits should be mentioned. first, one country’s culture is known by foreign tourists via traveling. Take Vietnam as an example. Annually, a million of visitors comes to Vietnam to visit a variety of cultural places such as ha Long Bay, Thien Mu pagoda or some kinds of places relating to history. This is a proof that culture is being kept by the impacts of tourism. What is more, tourism is also a significantly mark that attracts a lot of international companies who are willing to invest with a high deal, which increase the governmental budget.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the fact that there a lot of argument that whether tourism brings disadvantage or advantage, I believe that everything has their own bad and good sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89394656843 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0046029854 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852025730527 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271160378835 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262702134746 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474174742512 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331186469971 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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