Nowadays, our mother earth is weeping owing to two major threats, pollution and climatic variation. However, many conference held in the world to solve this severe problem, but problem is still there. This essay will shed some light on core reasons fir this and propose some solid solutions.
One of the main causes of the problem is that, ineffective actions of government over the offender regarding to the pollution. For an example, due to modern epoch, human beings are using more vehicles for the movement which forges huge air pollution. Government should take strict proceed to prevent this problem. Moreover, global warming is also one of the most hazardous factor due to releasing of CFC gas, carbon dioxide and other pollutants. Thus, government should set plantation to fight with air pollution and save planet.
Another problem is that, although people knows everything about pollution. Nevertheless, they run to make money only by targeting the planet’s life. Nothing but mitigation! that is what the world needs. The leaders from over the world should take decision to fight with pollution and climate change. Not only to take decision to put in dark but to embark implimentation as fast as possible for the global’s life. To tackle this issue, not only leaders however all the human beings have to participate.
To sum up, authorities such as regime and teachers, organise some seminar on pollution awareness and teach how to reduce it. In addition, folks too having responsibility to save the planet by using eco-friendly things and starts plantation of trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conference seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conferences'.
Suggestion: many conferences
...lution and climatic variation. However, many conference held in the world to solve this severe ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...et's life. Nothing but mitigation! that is what the world needs. The leaders fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, thus, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21789883268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74119473709 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5929014748 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192645499414 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578414657008 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476314320401 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102970684808 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310366372734 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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