In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better
Discuss both views and give your opinions
In this world of integration, getting an overseas education is often a bone of contention. While some believe there are other viable methods to be employed for a high-paid job, I still side with those who deem studying abroad an ultimate key to getting a remunerative employment opportunity.
Advocates of the former perspective disregard overseas education, postulating that there are other alternatives to obtain a well-paid job, specifically studying domestically by online means. Their reason is that due to the advancement of the Internet, learning in domestic countries is as effective and fruitful as in foreign countries, which often involves language barriers and cultural differences. As we all know, the Internet provides numerous learning opportunities like online courses to students, making a vast amount of knowledge available at a low cost compared to the exceeding sum of money invested in foreign learning packs. Furthermore, some well-paid jobs require applicants with no profound degrees, nor foreign experience. Instead, soft skills and dedication are more valued, underscoring the belief that individuals do not necessarily have to possess a foreign education background to achieve a lucrative occupation.
However, the aforementioned perspective overlooks the unique merits of studying overseas, especially when international recognition and valuable experience are considered. As for external appreciation, by taking abroad courses, overseas students can acquire academic recognition, namely college diplomas, degrees and various certificates, thereby bolstering their professional profile. These credentials are particularly advantageous in contemporary society that prioritizes achievements over others. Regarding realistic experience, while students who study domestically are often characterized as short-sighted, learning in developed countries such as America and Australia can widen students’ horizons by offering them a high-quality education with advanced teaching techniques and facilities, thus providing them with a more welcoming access to expertise than in their own countries. Eventually, these distinctive benefits make studying abroad a preferable option to the online one, which is an oversimplified view.
In closing, the assertion that learning in domestic countries plays even a better role than learning overseas when taking a high-paid occupation is simplistic. Therefore, I cannot concur with this belief and posit that going abroad is the most suitable choice to obtain a desirable job, catalyzing a prospective career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05753424658 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33044774081 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624657534247 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9816015253 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.928571429 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176781947034 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590936197977 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672181517977 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109501048778 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502144940074 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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