Essay topics:
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Distinguishing between right and wrong is an important skill. Children should be taught to learn this ability from an early age. Although some people believe that punishment plays a vital role in this process, I cannot completely agree, especially with physical punishment.
Physical punishment can have a negative effect on a child's mental health. There are numerous studies on the effect of physical punishment, and a majority of these studies have proved that it can adversely affect children in the long run. The reason behind these findings is that punishing children physically not only can encourage violent behavior, but it could also cause children to resent the guardian. If children are exposed to aggressive behavior, they will be more likely to become psychologically damaged, and rebel against the rules. In other words, the more exposure to physical punishment, the more likely they are to become rebellious and turn to crime in the long run.
However, children should be taught to differentiate between right and wrong, and one way to achieve this is by simple punishments. There are some types of discipline that are not physical, limiting children's access to video games or TV, for instance. Parents can use these limitations to positively punish their children and teach them about the negative aspects of their behavior. On the other hand, teachers spend a lot of time with the students. One way to punish students effectively would be extra homework. If children have to spend more time on home works, this will work as a deterrent and make them realize their wrong choices.
In conclusion, even though physical punishment should be banned in schools and families, there are several means of punishment, such as extra homework, to teach children about the difference between right and wrong. I would rather our teachers and caretakers used these methods rather than physical punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'several means'.
Suggestion: several means
...ned in schools and families, there are several means of punishment, such as extra homework, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42394822006 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92528351584 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576051779935 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3100923538 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239407846967 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906197457074 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731380598975 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167114489326 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975075799543 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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