Essay topics: Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
This twenty one first century is the century of technology . Technology has made easier for people in their daily life. It has helped many people in their work , education , and so on. In other hand, it has also made people lazy , weaker , and so on. Internet is one of the mostly used technology.
First and foremost, technology is helping people to be more sociable. Almost all the people in this world use internet. Then , the people using internet can know about his society or country due to which he can involve in social programs or he can help in solving the problems . For example, a girl is suffering from cancer then if her problem is posted on internet then many people who want to help her through it. So internet helped people to be sociable . Furthermore, technology provide the information of every second to the people. So that, people can know about their society or country.
On the other hand, people have been believing that the social network keep them in touch with others , but it gives you that virtual social world ,and people can share their opinions and communicate , but when they go out to the real world , they can not even express their feelings with the same words that they have been using in the internet . For instance, a person can do conversation of his work in internet with his boss but when they meet he can't express his feeling . People who use technology tend to get too carried away to listen or pay attention to anything going on around them making them less sociable to anyone or anything. Also the technology can become I guess you could say addictive to anyone using it.
Finally, looking at both pros and cons of technology, it strikes me that technology is making people less sociable . Because people are being addict to internet and game. They are not taking the advantage of technology . In other words, people are misusing technology.
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- Essay topics: Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i guess, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70516717325 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41837403865 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504559270517 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.077565099 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231450532933 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820692552176 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631290364977 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157129298351 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444878381732 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.