Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Modern technology has entered each and every field. In modern world, technology play an indispensable role in overcoming the environmental issues that are in trend. I totally agree that the implementation of new techniques will solve the problems.
The foremost reason is the advent of new technologies in the automobile industry. Nowadays, engineers are designing vehicles that works on eco-friendly sources of energy. For example, E-rickshaw, buses and autos working on Compressed Natural Gas. These vehicles will help to reduce pollution which overall helps to decrease Global Warming. But at present, these are not afforded by the normal people at a large number. However, in future these devices will get more efficient and will be available at a large scale so that it will solve the problem.
Moreover, water cleaning machines have been introduced which can clean the stagnant water automatically. One of them is installed in sacred pool of Golden Temple, for instance. But government is thinking to implement it on a large scale in near future. As these machines will help to clean the rivers that are flooded with the garbage and waste from industries. Furthermore, scientist are researching new ways to monitor the heat produced by the industrial plants so that government will apply new rules on them. Also, the usage of wood for paper is reduced by the invention of the pen drive or cloud servers and many more. Engineers are planning to design more durable devices using nano technology which will be useful in near future.
To conclude, technology has created solutions for many challenges. Although, these solutions are not 100% accurate and effective, yet I believe that technology will definitely solve the environmental problems that we faces today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...olve the environmental problems that we faces today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27816901408 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85562077766 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4614207153 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2777777778 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194999557819 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555753308118 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700964780918 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14135725863 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722662858719 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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