Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technologies have been solving many of difficult environmental challenges which human beings had faced before, such as securing clean water and recycling paper wastes. Considering such achievements we experienced, there is a high chance that future technological advancement will enable the world to tackle important environmental problems of these days. Nowadays, Global Warming and Polluted Ocean are claimed as pressing issues, and I think technology can solve them in future although it takes a certain amount of time.
Firstly, as high attention for 16 years old girl's speech at UN and the historically serious damage reported in Venice flood, the Global Warming is critical and effective and urgent solutions are required. To tackle this, clean energy such as solar power and biogas power are recognized as a key solution. It is difficult, however, to scale such sustainable energy plants in global-wide, because to support human's activities, it requires huge power, since the world's population is growing while reaching the zenith of industrialization in many countries. Technological development, in the way, can solve this issue and provide enough clean energy for people. It may take time, but recent advancement of solar power plant is notable and many experts welcome such improvements which contributes making the clean energy as an economical option for many poor countries.
In addition to that, Polluted Ocean is another challenge people face. This problem is deep-rooted because use of plastics is widely spread even in the developing countries. Because plastics is convenient and cheap. Therefore, unless human can invent alternative materials which are equally useful and economical and as well as eco-friendly, it is hard to remove all the plastics garbage from the sea. However, recently washable silicone bags are on sale for an alternative for plastic lunch bags. It is just one example and it could not cover all use cases of the plastic, but such new inventions can help keeping ocean clean eventually.
As such, technology in future can enable people to solve even the most difficult and serious environment challenges, but it will not be able to happen in one day. So tenacious investment for technological development is important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ties, it requires huge power, since the worlds population is growing while reaching th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40845070423 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98142899719 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588732394366 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4939874574 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14231020169 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479351334948 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563343376228 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102972228939 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075355791216 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.