In order to solve traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution.

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In order to solve traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution.

Submitted by Jasneet on Sat, 09/21/2019 - 11:20

With the advent of affordable automobile, traffic congestion is increasing day by day. It is the biggest problem in many cities around the world. One possible solution is to improve heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this measure.

To commence with, the foremost benefit of such measure is that heavy tax would discourage the car owners from using their own cars instead they will start using the public transport which will reduce traffic on roads. Moreover, the increase usage of public transport will encourage the government to use raised funds to make the changes. For instance, people often do not use old buses and trains so high taxes would generate enough to make necessary changes.

Nevertheless, there are drawbacks to such a solution. Firstly, this would be a heavy burden on car owners. At present, taxes are already high for a lot of people and higher taxes means less money for people who do not have choice but to drive. As this will hit the people of medium or low class while the richer class will still afford these taxes which is not fair. For example, cabs are already expensive these days and further taxes will increase the prices which will decrease their income.

To conclude, this solution is beneficial to some extent to improve the situation but there are both advantages and disadvantages in implementing such policy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98775510204 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47864347363 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8683808225 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236693513672 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844252005844 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642022618257 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14881370324 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391639968387 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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