Every year more and more waste and pollution are created. How are common people affected by this trend? What can individuals can do to address the situation?
Pollution is the major concern of new civilized world which has a toxicological impact on human health. In recent years, rubbish and contamination are producing excessively. Due to the fact, general public have to suffer from various diseases and to meet this challenge, each person can reduce the amount of trash generated from home by ditching plastic bags and composting biodegradable materials as possible.
The increase of waste and pollution has become a critical issue as it is now threatening even the ordinary people. Exposure to improperly handled trash makes the environment dirty and produce harmful virus in the air. As a result, people affect by copious illnesses such as skin irritation, blood infection and physical growth problem. In addition, diseases related to respiration such as Asthma and Pneumonia are also common to people of any ages. Moreover, litters thrown in the water sources make water contaminated and local residents get infected by Dysentery and Diarrhea, if they consume contaminated water.
Every individual should minimize the quantity of waste that generate in day to day life to prevent this vulnerable situation. For this, they ought to reduce the use of disposable plastic and switching to alternative bags. Cloth shopping bag, for instance, can be used for grocery shopping instead of choosing single-use plastic bags. Furthermore, a large amount of garbage thrown into trash could be composted and use to fertilize fields and gardens. Such actions will help to alleviate the possibility of spread of infectious diseases.
In conclusion, although severe illnesses due to waste and pollution are a common problem both in developing and developed countries, it can mitigate with the continuous help of ordinary people if they manage household trash by minimizing the use of plastic and making compost of organic materials.
- The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 91
- The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problem does this cause What can be done to encourage people to buy local products 73
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- A lot of money is spent on old buildings Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building now ones To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...producing excessively. Due to the fact, general public have to suffer from various diseases an...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...l virus in the air. As a result, people affect by copious illnesses such as skin irritati...
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Line 6, column 415, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hrown into trash could be composted and use to fertilize fields and gardens. Such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40614334471 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88505139157 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617747440273 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8288801329 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148895842568 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428464997215 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402522664754 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864297380369 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218735240899 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.