Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problem does this cause?
What can be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Large companies spend huge amount of money to promote their products and people easily get attracted to purchase those products. In this essay I will firstly examine that the major problem of this phenomenon is closure of local businesses and then submit financial support from government to local companies would be the viable solution to motivate people.
The foremost problem caused by big corporations grabbing attention towards their goods is disappearance of domestic businesses. Due to globalization, abundance of global companies have been able to advertise their manufacture as they can pour enormous budgets. As a result, many people tend to use more exported materials by getting influenced by advertisement and the prominent personality used in commercials. Moreover, local enterprises are likely to demise gradually. For example, in Nepal, majority of people opt for processed foods such as burgers and sausages instead of locally produced organic foods.
Providing substantial funds for local manufacturer companies can be an effective way to encourage human beings to buy local products. If government contributes money to support local businesses, they can use it not only on promotion of materials, but also to increase the quality of goods. Thereby, they can compete with large businesses. In addition, donated money can be used for opening branches in different places to broaden the sales network. Pashmina industry, for instance, has become globally recognized business from a local company with the help of government.
In conclusion, although people purchase products of huge enterprise being attracted by marketing and promotion, government can increase access of local productions by investing adequate funds to spread supply network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65037593985 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9745490791 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1373773755 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345644631371 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106197441194 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527924123153 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197541403802 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00684269735775 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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