Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion, and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problem does this cause?
What can be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Large companies spend vast amounts of money promoting their products, and people easily get attracted to purchasing those products. In this essay, I will first examine that the significant problem of this phenomenon is the closure of local businesses. Latter, submit financial support from government to local companies would be a viable solution to motivate people.
The central problem caused by big corporations grabbing attention towards their goods is the disappearance of domestic businesses. Due to globalization, an abundance of global companies has been able to advertise their manufacture as they can pour enormous budgets. As a result, many people tend to use more exported materials by getting influenced by advertisements and commercials' prominent personalities. Moreover, local enterprises are likely to demise gradually. For example, in Nepal, most people opt for processed foods such as burgers and sausages instead of locally produced organic foods.
Providing substantial funds for local manufacturer companies can be an effective way to encourage human beings to buy local products. Suppose the government contributes money to support local businesses. In that case, they can use it not only to promote materials but also to increase the quality of goods. Thereby, they can compete with large businesses. Besides, donated money can use for opening branches in different places to broaden the sales network. For instance, the pashmina industry has become a globally recognized business from a local company with government help.
In conclusion, people purchase products of the colossal enterprise because they use marketing policy to attract costumers. The government also can draw attention from people by investing adequate funds to spread the supply network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66044776119 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97779663139 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.298051098 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294938224394 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831445664057 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434050446901 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164353719994 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168393352496 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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