Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
An increasing number of languages are endangered, and some of them have even disappeared. There are some people claim that it will have no differences and thus the authority can omit this issue. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement.
Language is the essence of a civilization. People built their countries and communities successfully since they used their own language to communicate and discuss issues. Were it not for language, the prosperous cities and marvelous buildings might not ever exist. Furthermore, language consists of some traditional knowledge and histories of a nation or a tribe. Therefore, the importance of various language cannot be underestimated.
The loss of languages can have negative impact on human beings in many ways. To begin with, the diversity of language and its certain conventional activities will dramatically decrease. Since the people who speak the language become fewer and fewer, the precious culture will vanish as well. It can lead to the shortage resources for our off springs when exploring the world; additionally, limited awareness of different cultures they will receive, What's more, we will never have a chance to experience specific cultural environments in person for good.
In conclusion, I am convinced that it is crucial to conserve the diversity of language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44497607656 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08539363033 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6593215895 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20138636371 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688736745121 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394621500138 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100565583441 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606601299532 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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