Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is claimed that the phenomenon of languages vanishing each year is not a serious issue as many believe that life becomes less difficult thanks to this disappearance. This essay totally disagrees with this view for the following reasons.
To begin with, the diversity of languages enhances human’s ability to obtain an understanding of a variety of nations. Specifically, languages are closely associated with cultures and traditions, which makes them a powerful tool for those with an aspiration to explore the history of certain countries. For instance, the national language of Vietnam was invented based on the Latin alphabet by Western priests when they came to Vietnam for missionary work in the 17th century, which has then become widely used since the colonization of the French in the early 1900s. Therefore, conducting research on Vietnamese as a language helps to pave the way for the acquisition of profound comprehension of this nation’s past events and their impacts on today's lives. Broadly, the maintenance of uncommon languages allows one to gain access to the knowledge of the related civilizations more easily.
In addition, the protection of all existing languages is important because coming along with it is the preservation of scientific and artistic works. In more detail, languages are investigated and analyzed to develop and conserve invaluable accomplishments from the old days until now. A prime example of this is the continuous study of linguistics masters on “Nom’’, which is the first official language of Vietnam that has been considered a dead language since 1945, to recover the ancient literature compositions and preserve them for research or publishing. Therefore, it would be of tremendous problem for humans to maintain the achievements inherited from the previous generations should they decide to let languages die out.
In conclusion, life would certainly become more challenging with fewer languages. Not only does the loss of languages create a barrier preventing humans from the attainment of knowledge, but it also affects negatively the conservation of excellent written works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47590361446 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0927149966 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7961074266 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261028319714 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940105401004 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435315959689 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162690734695 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548814411434 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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