Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
EVERY YEAR MANY PEOPLE TEND O FIND LEARNING NEW LANGUAGE IS NOT IMPORTANT FOR THEIR LIFE AS THEY WILL NOT MEET OTHER VARIOUS COUNTRIES TO SPEAK THEIR LANGUAGE EVERYDAY. HOWEVER, I PERSONALLY DISAGREE THE WHERE IT IS NOT IMPORTANT FOR OUR DAILY LIFE.
FIRST, LEARNING NEW LANGUAGE COULD GAIN MORE KNOWLEDGE ON THE LANGUAGE THAT THEY NEVER HEARD BEFORE. SUPPOSED MOST STUDENTS ARE PLANNING TO STUDY OUTSIDE OF COUNTRY TO GET BETTER EDUCATION, SAY, THAT STUDENT PLANNING TO GO TO UNITED STATES AND IT IS A PLACE WHERE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IS NEEDED. WITHOUT HAVING AN EXPERIENCE ON STUDYING ENGLISH BEFORE, IT WILL BE HARD FOR THE STUDENTS TO UNDERSTAND THE PROFESSOR IN UNITED STATES' SCHOOLS. FURTHERMORE, IT COULD ALSO HAD TO LESS SOCIAL LIFE AS HEY WILL MEET LESS NEW FACES IN THEIR DAILY LIFE.
BUSINESS HAVE BEEN REALLY IMPORTANT FR EVERYONE, WHERE THEY COULD LEARN A LOT OF MONEY, SOMEHOW, HAVING BUSINESS WITH OTHER COUNTRIES SUCH AS CHINA WHERE THEY ARE KNOWN AS ON OF THE MOST SUCCESSFUL COUNTRY IN DOING BUSINESS. LEARNING CHINA'S LANGUAGE WOULD BE BETTER WOULD BE A BETTER IDEA AS YOU COULD GAIN MUCH BETTER INCOME WITH CHINA. THE MORE LANGUAGE THAT PEOPLE LEARN THE BETTER BUSINESS THAT YOU OWNED WILL BE MUCH MORE BETTER. AS IT AT THE END, YOU WILL RECEIVE A LT OF MONEY FROM DONG BUSINESS WITH OTHER COUNTRIES.
OVERALL, IT MAY BE NOT IMPORTANT OR USEFUL TO LEARN NEW LANGUAGE AND USE IT IN OUR OW COUNTRY. HOWEVER, LEARNING NEW LANGUAGE COULD LEAD TO BETTER SOCIAL LIFE WITH OTHER NATIONS AND GAINING MORE KNOWLEDGE IN OUR DAILY LIFE.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...RIOUS COUNTRIES TO SPEAK THEIR LANGUAGE EVERYDAY. HOWEVER, I PERSONALLY DISAGREE THE WHE...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'COULD' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: Have
...TES SCHOOLS. FURTHERMORE, IT COULD ALSO HAD TO LESS SOCIAL LIFE AS HEY WILL MEET LE...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: One
...S SUCH AS CHINA WHERE THEY ARE KNOWN AS ON OF THE MOST SUCCESSFUL COUNTRY IN DOING...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78731343284 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34141419397 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488805970149 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3476739091 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218537869554 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954072824431 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455077943783 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15232631546 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398422726336 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.