Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is a long-standing controversy over the disappear of diverse languages per year. In this situation, some people argue that human life will be much more comfortable as they use the same language across the world. Although it could be right, the disadvantages in less existence of words are needed to take into account as well.
It can not be denied that if people in the world spoke out the same language, it would be practical and useful for them, especially businessmen. In detail, in businesses, employers can hire more outstanding and competent job applicants regardless of their nationality, races, and ages because they would communicate with one another readily by speaking the same language. Also, this phenomenon might lead to significant productivity in companies with high efficiency caused by high-skilled workers and also result in national economic growth in the end.
However, there is a serious concern if many distinctive languages disappear continually. The most severe detrimental influence is that there is a problem of loss of national identity. This is because languages are strongly linked to each culture. Therefore, losing words means disappearing unique and beautiful national heritage as well as cultural legacy. Aside from that, in society, we can easily see that even though the public speaks the same mother tongue in the country, there are still communication problems between them, which makes people feel uncomfortable and unpleasant due to the lack of understanding and meanings behind.
In conclusion, I, by and large, disagree with the statement because there are some adverse effects of the lack of language diversity such as losing cultural and national identities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ere is a long-standing controversy over the disappear of diverse languages per year. In this ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40148698885 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96355515677 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8921553098 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253083493388 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897145780299 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793108550776 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150892294736 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523019685683 0.056905535591 92% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.