Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that several languages die out annually. Public argue that fewer language is more simple for human life. In this essay, I completely disagree with the statement for a reason.
In the one hand, the advantage of having a various language is each region has a local tongue which is referring to their identity. It is because language is affected by culture or tribe. For example, Indonesia has 1800 islands which have their own language based on area, such as in Java, the dwellers talk in Javanese, while in Madura, they use Maduranese. As a result, Indonesia is known as the hugest mother tongue diversity. It is clear that variation of language is a speciality from every part of the world.
Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages of overwhelming kind of language. Firstly, society find it difficult to have a conversation with others who come from different area because they speak in another tongue. Taken as an illustration, foreigners from overseas need translator when they have a vacation in Bali land, Indonesia. Secondly, it will increase the level of racism. It is due to people would recognize one’s tribe according to their accents. For instance, individuals prefer to communicate with friends who have the same speech as theirs. It is no doubt that there is a limitation in a human relationship because of the dissimilar language.
To sum up where I stand, despite there are negative facts, but I believe that language should be preserved because this is the wealth and identity of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98828125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83523525655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.333746045 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253369203725 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789546769597 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672579617206 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159007469548 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805025856132 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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