Most of the people think that some Human beings are born with good leadership skills. Yet others believe that some people try to establish leadership skill by learning. There are two kind of human beings in this world. Firstly, those people lived and grown up in difficult situations has more leadership skills. Secondly, human beings learn leadership skills through their life experiences. For instance, some people are good at tackling high pressure situation from their younger age onwards. some other people develop their leadership skills by motivating themselves or by putting themselves into difficult situation. In a research it shows that, individuals from middle class family are having more leadership skills than other two classes( Rich and Poor) from their younger age. Middle class families living can be a major reason for developing this skill upon youngsters. For example, mostly middle class individual show more active behavior in most of the activities. Thus, some people believe that some individuals are having natural leadership quality by birth. There are another kind of individuals trying to develop their individual skills. Those individuals who develop there leadership skills will put themselves into difficult situation to and try to overcome it, through this these people will understand their limitations and overcome obscene situations. For instance, people learn martial arts because it need high concentration and disciple, Two factors essential for leadership skills. Therefore, few people suggest that, people develop their leadership skills by learning. To conclude, some people have inherent leadership skills. yet others learn the skills through different other techniques.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lls through different other techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66147859922 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62845003086 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501945525292 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6725350161 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5882352941 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376724659387 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143997608797 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837413238692 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376724659387 0.151304729494 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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