everyone should become vegetation because people do not need to eat meat for healthy diet. do you agree and disagree with given statement.
While, this trend is beneficial to some extent. I would also like to argue it's disadvantages are more significant.
There are numerous advantages compared to the disadvantages of eating meat. it consists of many vitamins, protiens and amino acids which helps in the physical development of the body and restores the energy faster.
The meat is a good source of protein in the healthy diet protein plays an important role and when taken in prescribed quantities helps us to keep fit by burning the fat present in the body.
Also it consists of the potassium and calcium which are very important for the bone growth, development, repair and building stronger immune system so only medical professionals suggest the people with problem related to bones to consume meat. There's an example relating to this in my life, one of the friends of mine is a karate player when he visited the doctor, the doctor examined him and told to his parents that he needs to consume beef for his problems which is related to the calcium content.
The NECC comitee in India recommends people to take egg day by day to lead a healthier and happier life.
In the recent survey performed on a fifteen individuals of two groups where one group didn't consumed the meat and the other group of people consumed meat as a part of their diet, The results of the survey shows that people who consumed the meat are stronger and more immune to the diseases than the group eating vegetation.
So due to the advantages I have mentioned above I prefer to include meat as a part of healthy dietary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7700729927 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56931455276 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9844930311 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145933161608 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488675837102 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393584349092 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566601687306 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031699269027 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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