All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to my opinion, I think college and university students will get great benefit with an opportunity for studying abroad at least one semester.
Overall, studying one semester abroad will enable us to gain practical knowledge and involve us in the real time scienarios at the work place providing us with the confidence to face the situations, this is gained because of the practical training which we are undergoing during our study.
Although, in our country for example in India we are gaining the amount of therotical knowledge required for the workplace but we don't know how to use it in the real time situations. we need to know how to use it at the work place to be more job ready. In most of the developed foreign countries such as United States due the high end infrastructure available at the college or university enables teaching us how to use the knowledge gained to use in the practical applications.
While, studying one semester at foreign we will get a chance to spend time with wide range of people from different countries and cultures which develops the quality of team work , leadership and time management while working in a group we will gain ability to express our point of view in group of people, we will also learn to speak empathetically by thinking from others point of view. this helps us to avoid conflicts arising at work place due to misunderstandings.
Because of the above mentioned reasons I think studying one semester abroad will be fruitful with enumerous benefits.
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...work place due to misunderstandings. Because of the above mentioned reasons I think ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, at least, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84328791393 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.661990897 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206160239479 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963407045924 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621893201023 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132126592053 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501136202315 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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