Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that leaving standard education before the age of 18 is not a wise decision, especially in the contemporary society. Personally, I agree with this statement, and this essay will explain why teenagers should not quit school too early.
At first glance, it can be seen easily in movies and novels that an adolescent having extraordinary talents may accomplish great achievements without attending standardized education. However, in the real world, this is extremely rare and such decision usually involves risks like unemployment or labour abusing.
Meanwhile, experts from many parts of the world agreed that the first 18 years of a person should be spent on studying. During this age range, children have to attend school to sharpen their thinking skill, to increase intelligence, and also to learn about the culture. For example, in the United States and many Western countries, the standard education was divided into primary school and secondary school, while that in Vietnam is split into three levels. Despite difference in educational regime, most children often finish school by the age of 18. Therefore, 18 is obviously an ideal age, agreed by both the professional and the government, for choosing the next career path.
Additionally, if many young students leave school too early, the nation will experience negative situation in the future. High school is usually standardized for the adolescent to develop mentally and intellectually, and also to be an essential preparation for university. Therefore, when the trend of leaving high school prior to 18 becomes popular, there would be a sharp decrease in attendants of further education. This will result in a shortage of well-trained employees for technological industries, and a redundancy in other fields, such as shopkeeper and salesman.
In conclusion, in my opinion, high school plays an vital role in the maturation of one person and it additionally serves as the preparation level of further education. Therefore, children should not skip any year to leave the school before 18.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37003058104 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97315027425 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6999812944 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164029512748 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598875253581 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428149749409 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933377328633 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439919658072 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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