Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, many people choose to become vegetarian to improve their health. While vegetarian diet can be positive to some extent, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant.
On the one hand, there are several advantage of being a vegetarian. Firstly, fruits and vegetables contain numerous necessary nutrition and lower on sugar than meat dishes. Therefore, vegetarians are less likely to suffer from illness such as heart disease, obesity,… Moreover, this trend can affect positive to natural environment. If many people chose not to eat meat, the demand for land to farming animals would be reduced. There natural environment for wild animals would be restored.
On the other hand, adopting vegetarian diets can be a challenge. First of all, meat still plays an important role in daily diets as it has necessary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If we reduced the amount of meat in our diet, this would cause imbalance to health. Secondly, becoming vegetarian can cause discomfort in social events when people around them do not have the same eating habit. For example, before hanging out with friends or family, vegetarian have to make people around them aware of their choice of food. Moreover, as there are not many restaurants offers vegetarians diets, there will be limited meal choices.
In conclusion, being vegetarian can improve people’ s health and protect environment. However, in my opinion, the drawback are greater, because it would not completely substitute for meat and may cause challenges in social events.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advantages'.
Suggestion: several advantages
...nificant. On the one hand, there are several advantage of being a vegetarian. Firstly, fruits ...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...m illness such as heart disease, obesity,… Moreover, this trend can affect positiv...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...necessary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. I...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ecessary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ssary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If we re...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If we re...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25098039216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72057957957 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2565400345 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186504748574 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598313216993 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452411522851 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112345278158 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531437913492 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advantages'.
Suggestion: several advantages
...nificant. On the one hand, there are several advantage of being a vegetarian. Firstly, fruits ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...m illness such as heart disease, obesity,… Moreover, this trend can affect positiv...
^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...necessary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. I...
^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ecessary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ssary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If we re...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssary nutrition such as protein, fat,.. which is hard to find in vegetables. If we re...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25098039216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72057957957 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2565400345 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186504748574 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598313216993 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452411522851 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112345278158 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531437913492 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.