Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that meat cannot provide a healthy diet and that many people should become vegetarians remains controversial. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this belief.
On the one hand, a plant-based diet cannot meet enough essential nutrients for human daily needs. Although there are many scientific articles have proven that vegetables such as carrots, onions, and lemons have lots of vitamins and anti-oxidants that help people fight against chronic diseases, they are still deficient in some minerals. Zinc or iron for example, while these minerals are pro-substances for blood generation processes, vegetables can not adapt enough as meat does. As a result, people especially children can suffer anemia if they conform to long-term vegetarian-friendly meals. Moreover, the intensive farming processes result in high levels remained pesticides in greens, which have negative impacts for human health.
On the other hand, the choice between the diversity of food should be followed by the hobby. In some countries, meat has become a symbol of cuisine culture. For instance, during the Thanksgiving holiday, turkey is a central dish symbolizing the harvest and expressing gratitude. The change of this belief is a challenging process, beginning from cultural and social perspectives. In addition, some people immerse themselves in the flavor and texture of meat. Despite the fact that lab-grown meat is developing, the replication of “real meat” experiences is still far off. In reality, the complete replacement of this artificial meat seems to be realistic due to high prices.
In conclusion, a heathy diet should be balanced between vegetables and meat to obtain good health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...s remains controversial. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this belief. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52490421456 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98978752353 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6265940636 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188055961795 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598877854349 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566421792398 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129163554831 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536418435894 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.