Extreme sports such as ski diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this view?
In recent years extreme sports have become really popular amongst people who like to put themselves at challenges. There is an opinion in which sports have dangers to humans need to be banned. I do not fully support this viewpoint and clarify why.
Firstly there are numerous people have been training wiht ski diving and skiing at snowy mountains in freezy weather who are putting their health at risk of having influenza and getting injured. For instance when watching the news on television we witness the traumatic consequences of incidental events in which sportsman has fallen down or crashed to stone whilst going down on skiing. In extereme cases it end up with disabilities on locomotion or even death. For these reosons given above it should be restricted for people who has not practised enough to train with these sports on their own.
Furthermore, regretably some people ignore certain rules when doing extreme sports not having safety harness and getting a professional coach who could be deterrant of accidents. Many people thay neglected the safety rules are highly bound to get injuries eventually.
Yet, there are some factors which have proven extreme sports are insecure a lot of people following rules get pleasure from them. They are likely to have a healthy lifestyle which lead them to keep fit in many instances.
To conclude, my feeling is that extreme sports need to be made safer rather than banned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05042016807 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48519377963 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.134465304 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194910758292 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707841423114 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525139164635 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108647105239 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469634426005 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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