Families should be responsible for caring for the elderly. Do you agree or disagree?
As there are more seniors today than in the past, taking care of the elderly seems to be a frequent issue for numerous families. Many individuals believe that caring for seniors must be their families’ responsibility. From my perspective, I agree with this point of view for several following reasons.
The first reason is that family care often seems to be much better for seniors than any other type of caring service. Obviously, not all families are in a position to have sufficient time or financial conditions to ensure the best caring environments for elderly members in their families. However, seniors’ offspring can always be with and take care of them with lots of love and respect. In many cases, staying at home with other family members even helps improve the elderly’s physical and mental health. This makes sense as there are no feelings of being lonely or isolated inside their minds, and they can have companionship and family support almost whenever they need. This gradually improves seniors’ well-being, making them have a more optimistic outlook about their issues, and even have positive effects on their physical health.
Moreover, looking after ageing parents are better off being one of the top priorities for their offspring. The elderly, have spent most of their life to look after and help their children flourish into well-rounded individuals. They sacrifice to bring up their offspring while trying to earn a living to raise the whole family. Seniors have tried their best to make the family’s living conditions to be better, so children and other members should care for them not only by responsibility but also by unconditional love. Many young adults choose nursing homes for their ageing parents, but they may never know what their parents are forced to do and how pessimistically they feel day by day.
To sum up, I firmly agree with the point of view that seniors should be taken care of by their beloved families. Family care, in many cases, can be the most relevant caring type to the elderly, for it takes them away from pessimistic feelings. Looking after ageing family members should be a top priority for members of younger generations, as the elderly have spent most of their lives caring for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to nurse'.
Suggestion: to nurse
...ditional love. Many young adults choose nursing homes for their ageing parents, but the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02393617021 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60366635454 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4255868894 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358884604717 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141867260836 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978115518843 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275635212415 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089850266329 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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