Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that paying taxes for children to private school is not essential with their parents to contribute to the state education.Personally, i completely disagree with this view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the fees in sending children to private school should not be cut in these family. Firstly,it is not easy to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction which also needs a complex process to tackle for a long time,and have to pay a great deal of money for staffs specialising the field to do the work.Secondly, many people all spend money on public services which they also do not expect to reduce tax for this. A good example for this is that some individuals are fortunate enough when they do not get in trouble several dangerous situations to call police or fire brigade in their life but they still must pay money for the services.Finally, if wealthy family were received tax discount for studying of children at private school,we might happen a situation when poorer people can pay higher tax than rich people,which leads to the increasing the gap between the rich and the poor.
On the other hand,i believe that supporting money on public school brings benefits for all members in society.All childrens at the school ages will approach a high quality education system if their parents accept tax for education.This also result in equal opportunities to young children in terms of education and well-educated workforce,in turn more productive and prosperous nation.Furthermore,there are advantages with children in lives.For example,nowadays a company owner needs qualified and competent staffs to work for them and a well-funded system can provide such employees.
In conclusion,while some people think that education taxes in private school should not be required to give by families,I believe that it would be wrong without balance between private and public school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16129032258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20370493119 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.374234261 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.666666667 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6666666667 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.3333333333 7.06120827912 359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334084543492 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187652902308 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723311402438 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226496845578 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563990062286 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.0946893788 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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