Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.
Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this?
<span class="fontstyle0">The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food. Some laud its<br>convenience and relatively low cost; however, in this essay I intend to argue that this kind of food<br>is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large. There are two<br>primary reasons for this.<br>First of all, it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast food to excess results in serious health<br>problems. Foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips – which are incredibly high in fat and<br>salt are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease. Moreover,<br>although I certainly agree that fast food is both affordable and convenient, the cost and<br>inconvenience of treating the illnesses it causes in later life are significant. In other words, while<br>fast food is beneficial in the short term, its long-term effects are generally negative.<br>Further and even more importantly, though, some fast food chains deliberately attempt to attract<br>children in order to shape their future eating habits. One particularly good example of this is the<br>character Ronald McDonald the bright clothes and smile of the McDonalds clown are a beacon to<br>children. Having grown up eating in McDonalds restaurants, people are likely to continue eating<br>there throughout their adult lives. It is also interesting to note that McDonalds provides<br>playgrounds and frequently holds children’s birthday parties in order to attract young children and<br>their parents.<br>By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of<br>life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public education<br>campaigns warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted</span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23943661972 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.79264546006 2.80592935109 171% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4084463805 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.2 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134591726561 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619909858762 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323508055331 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718814395769 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718814395769 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.21 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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