Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
I agree that women are responsible for choosing whether or not to have a baby. However, I do not think that it leads to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
Since it is a women’s body, it should be women’s right to decide on having a baby. Because the baby lives inside the women, not the man. Women should be able to choose if they want a baby that lives in their stomach, because if they do not want it nobody can say or do anything but respect, and if she decides to have a baby, no one can say her to abort just because they are not ready to become a dad, an aunt, a grandmother, etc.
Men should know their responsibilities when they start having sex. If the man is not psychologically and emotionally ready to become a dad, there is nothing wrong with it. But he has to support women if she decides to give birth. Yet, the idea that women are responsible for bringing the children up is a little wrong. Because no matter what, the baby is not only women’s children but also men's. So, even though a woman decided to have a baby, men are still responsible for their child and they need to support both the baby and the mother of the baby. Nevertheless, if a man leaves just because he is not ready, and the woman believes that she can give birth and raise her baby all on her own, then of course she can. Motherhood is something so special and powerful so fatherhood is. That also means a man can raise their baby on his own either. Which makes fatherhood and motherhood equally powerful.
In the conclusion, just because it’s all women’s decision at the end whether to have a baby or not, that does not mean man does not have any responsibilities once the baby is born since both genders have different kinds of responsibilities and roles as parents.
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- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries 67
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- The chart below shows the different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...that women are responsible for choosing whether or not to have a baby. However, I do not think...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anybody'.
Suggestion: anybody
...stomach, because if they do not want it nobody can say or do anything but respect, and...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
... she decides to have a baby, no one can say her to abort just because they are not ...
^^^
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come a dad, an aunt, a grandmother, etc. Men should know their responsibilities w...
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Line 6, column 904, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erhood and motherhood equally powerful. In the conclusion, just because it’s all...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41791044776 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58212578699 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45671641791 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4070363742 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423911844055 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157039813082 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132429423858 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304574706802 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157151339584 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.