Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, a pencil, or brush. What are the reasons for this? Is the decline in writing by hand a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable phenomenon that more and more writers experience digital writing devices instead of using traditional pens. This essay is going to reveal some behind causes and then provide both several advantageous and disadvantageous effects.
On the one hand, there are some advance reasons so that writers have reduced in traditional ink pens Firstly, technology development in physical keyboard of the computer or the visual keyboard of smartphone enable users to text conveniently. For example, writing sending letters, email or messages these keyboards which are embedded technology devices allow users to converse, to type or to chat effectively. Secondly, cloud storages or digital storages are increasing popular and reasonable to own them so that people could save innumerous documents or books into a tiny electric dish only. The explosion of these storages do not only help writers to easily access the documents and books through searching engine which are embedded in tool bars, but also to share them quickly to huge readers. Thus, these above-mentioned reasons should demonstrate partly that the tendency of writing without pens, pencils is beneficial to users.
On the other hand, the reduction in hand writing may lead from unwanted causes. To be more detailed, decreasing in written documents could sprout from educating of children. Each person has a typical character differently and this could lead to typical in writing by hands. Both school and family did not force children in practicing writing by hands. As a result, the personality of hand-letters no longer appear recently in communication. These should cause empty emotions of readers because all of these documents are similar and absolutely do not represent the icon of writers. A couple which is falling in love together sends loving letters written by hand simultaneously. This is extremely romantic. The feeling in love could disappear if the couple replaces hand written letters by Microsoft Word printed letters or digital emails via the Gmail soft of Google. This demonstrates that some negative developments must be come in users if they refuse to use the ink pens in necessary cases.
In conclusion, the movement of any tendency often brings both cutting edged points and drawbacks. Ink pens no longer govern in writing is not an exception. Combining digital writing devices and hand writing materials in each accurate demand brings writers effectiveness and productiveness.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers have reduced in traditional ink pens Firstly, technology development in physi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39432989691 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88758612504 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8521814969 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.65 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260540490273 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745072686652 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568375512495 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145108277119 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440959689916 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers have reduced in traditional ink pens Firstly, technology development in physi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39432989691 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88758612504 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8521814969 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.65 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260540490273 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745072686652 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568375512495 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145108277119 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440959689916 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.