Fewer people want to become teachers particularly in secondary school
In this modern, vast countries assume that many people would rather to choose another sort of job instead of being a teachers specifically in junior high school for some reasons. The people also stand to their opinion whether this profession exactly less attractive in their eye or vice versa. Longer explanation would be stated here.
Unquestionably, teacher is one of the most precious job and no one could deny. However, lots of people would reconsider this twice to take a deal with this profession. The particular reason that emphasized is about the amount of salary. People seen there was imbalance between the effort and the outgo. For instance, I ever reviewed many questionnaires which described research of teacher satisfaction. Most of the participant said they have plenty jobdesks and paid more attention to the students attitude, but the payment was a half amount they should received. According to this, we could understand over people general statements.
Nevertheless, it must no be people excused to refuse this occupation because it quite selfish. Vast children definitely require a figure who able to guide in the better circumstance. I believe that the country’s hope is held by every next generation, but they behaviour should be designed much better. In addition, the government should understand what the teacher’s line mostly need to enhance people interest upon this field. For example, the government are able to increase the expenses standard even an extra outlay to burn teacher’s motivation. This stuff is a crucial part, therefore it should be made up.
To recap, to become a teacher might not be the people's favour role due to lack of government support, so the government have to feel obligated to change the school teachers serenity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...se another sort of job instead of being a teachers specifically in junior high school for ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...jobdesks and paid more attention to the students attitude, but the payment was a half am...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ral statements. Nevertheless, it must no be people excused to refuse this occupa...
^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a able'.
Suggestion: who is a able
...st children definitely require a figure who able to guide in the better circumstance. I ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91713593111 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2780990057 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198328168189 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572852690439 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549604739886 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132601314664 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548185961375 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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