Finally, globalization and the rise of multinational corporations have had a tremendously good impact on society. Particularly in terms of producing work for people of all ages and allowing disadvantaged countries to grow economically.
In the developed world, some individuals opine that the number of multinational organizations, which have increased rapidly, offer various positive developments to the population in many countries around the world. Personally, I totally agree with this statement.
To start with, globalization provides a large number of benefits in terms of careers. Additionally, expanding foreign organizations to other countries provides more vacant positions to those population and also increases serval jobs in those places. For instance, Starbuck, which is an American multinational chain of coffeehouses, offers various part-time jobs to all of the university student around the word because they have more than 32000 stores in 80 countries. Consequently, many individuals at a young age are able to generate wages, which sometimes requires an inexperienced person.
Furthermore, the invasion of multinational corporations brought wealth and foreign currency to develop nations. This adds to the country overall budget and used further for healthcare, education and infrastructure. Many work opportunities will help each country's entire economic system thrive by stimulating the usage of money, and people will pay taxes on their spending and income. This added income can be used again for well being of citizens. For example, is India. Because of its low labour costs and government assistance, India is presently the most sought-after location for any company's investment.
In conclusion, globalization and the increase in multinational firms have a tremendous positive impact on society. Particularly in terms of producing work for people of all ages and allowing disadvantaged countries to grow economically.
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- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid 56
- The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is important and governments should spend more money on this To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'those populations'?
Suggestion: this population; those populations
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83266932271 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31625386869 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1551152178 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304152677192 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974619353621 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130282177635 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216209919066 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205986799952 0.056905535591 362% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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