The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as
many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws
introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The emerging growth of motor vehicles around the globe has forced people to promote alternative means of transportation as well as to introduce international policies. I completely agree with this statement because this may be a major step to control growing road issues and to promote productive means of transportation.
First of all, car ownership is increasing rapidly, which has caused a lot of traffic problems and road accidents. In other words, people are constantly depending upon motor vehicles for most of their activities, thus creating vehicle congestion within a city. When laws are introduced to maintain ownership of cars within each family of a society, this will halt people from owning private vehicles. As a result, traffic congestion can be solved to a better extent. For example, if a rule stating one car per family is introduced, the increasing figure of vehicle can be controlled.
Secondly, encouraging alternative means of transportation will result in reduction of cars and increase the usage of effective commuting methods. That is to mean, people will look out for other available methods like trains and cable-buses. Consequently, this will help people to forget about owning a car since trains are productive in terms of saving money and time. For instance, 80% of the population in Japan use trains, which has helped their government to manage traffic on public roads.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a government should promote other means of transportation as they aids to prevent people from buying motor vehicles which are really not productive if compared with above alternatives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... road accidents. In other words, people are constantly depending upon motor vehicles for most of their a...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'aid'
Suggestion: aid
...e other means of transportation as they aids to prevent people from buying motor veh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32432432432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00776413648 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5196244947 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197142676188 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730556465527 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390456062073 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110974909578 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409663643492 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.