The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
Nowadays, cars become a part of our lives. In UK, the amount of cars per household has increased alarmingly. Some people believe that different kinds of vehicle should be emboldened to control ownership and use.
First, private transportation is one of the reasons of environment pollution. Cars get into the air not only the enormous the amount of poisonous gases but also green-house effect. It makes no one can breath or have healthy lungs. It also makes the Earth such as changing the climate, the melt of ice on two poles and it danger of plenty of animals.
Second, too much private transportation causes traffic jam. Now the world must face with pollution problems. When everyonr uses his or her own cars, there is no place to travel. Public transport is one of the greatest solutions for this issue. Moreover, cars easily to get terrible accident cause by different kinds of transportation.
In conclusion, cars should not be encouraged in any way. However, people should not ban it. Private stransport onle need controlling.
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- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. 56
- The table illustrates the amount of energy production by five types of fuel in the UK in three different years 1990, 1996 and 2000 measured million tonnes. 67
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments andlarge companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? 56
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in thousand in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time 84
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in thousand in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...green-house effect. It makes no one can breath or have healthy lungs. It also makes th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99421965318 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8209750733 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.414385559 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.6 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5333333333 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204811975739 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060917517094 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713968775254 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12652775745 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695852104144 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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