Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative aources of energy is encouraged. Is this a positive or negative development?
In light of the negative impacts of the consumption of fossil fuel, it is true that the renewable energy source is using as a greener substitute. While this trend may indeed have some potential drawbacks, the are eclisped by the substaintial benefits offered to the sustainable development of the society and environment.
The downsides of the alternative energy consumption are define. The foremost problem is that all kinds of power generated from renewable source need the suistable locations that could carefully meet the requirements about topography and the right amount of energy sources to construct the systems. Therefore, the intermittency energy production can not meet the global energy demand. This is compounded by the fact that people from the developing countries can not afford to consume the renewable energy, since this is very expensive. For example, if people would like to generate electricity from hydro-power, it is neccessary for them to construct hydroelectric dam with the enormous amount of money to allot in.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aformentioned drawbacks, I am convinced that sustainable energy brings about greater benefits. The recreation activities from the unlimited natural resources of wind, sun, water and air can push for a greener future, hence human can reverse the damage done to the planet by reducing the consumption of non-renewable energy. Moreover, this changes can affect positively on the environment as they use the eco-friendly energy, such as carbon-free energy, solar energy or wind energy and so on. In constrat, the enormous energy consumption, especially of fossil fuel may entail a lot of carbon exhausion released in the atmosphere and catastrophically exarcebate the air pollution.
In conclusion, while greener energy source can entail certain drawbacks, I would opine that the advantages that accure to from consuming alternative energy source.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'defined'.
Suggestion: defined
... the alternative energy consumption are define. The foremost problem is that all kinds...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51013513514 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13648728705 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7379275024 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345391399965 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131608387895 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828989386389 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21514329616 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043052891913 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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