In this contemporary society, many nations consume fossil fuels involving coal, oil and natural gas as the core source. Nevertheless, renewable energy naming solar power, wind power or nuclear power are being used more widely. From my point of new, the merits of consuming renewable energy are definitely outweigh those of using nonrenewable power.
On the one hand, there are various benefits that -consuming renewable power brings to our society. To begin with, one major advantage is that these energy are more environmentally friendly than fossil fuels. To illustrate, when we use electric bike instead of using normal motorbike, the amount of exhaust fume released into air will be significantly declined. Therefore, this contributes a lot to saving the environment and our planet without carbon footprint. Additionally, another point worth pointing out is that using alternative energy can improve citizen's health due to its advantage. Hence, it will decrease the rate of some health-related problems naming respiratory diseases. Moreover, these renewable energy sources will have a positive impact on the economy of a nation in the long run. More specifically, this is because it's infinite and can be used and produced permanently.
On the other hand, despite the above mentioned positive aspects, there are also many drawbacks that should be taken into account. The principle one is that almost alternative energy including solar power, wind energy or geothermal energy depend on weather pattern and they are unpredictable and uncontrollable than fossil fuels. As a result, investors and the governments have to spend a great amount of money to buy equipment so as to control I and repair as well.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that the positive aspects of using alternative power outweigh its negative aspects. I honestly hope that each nations can do compatible way, depending on their situations.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...nsuming renewable energy are definitely outweigh those of using nonrenewable power. O...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this energy' or 'these energies'?
Suggestion: this energy; these energies
...begin with, one major advantage is that these energy are more environmentally friendly than ...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... great amount of money to buy equipment so as to control I and repair as well. Taking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, honestly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45874587459 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97834260558 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.077946751 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247154568923 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732649073674 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506696149303 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142691547235 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360118514001 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...nsuming renewable energy are definitely outweigh those of using nonrenewable power. O...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this energy' or 'these energies'?
Suggestion: this energy; these energies
...begin with, one major advantage is that these energy are more environmentally friendly than ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... great amount of money to buy equipment so as to control I and repair as well. Taking...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, honestly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45874587459 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97834260558 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.077946751 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247154568923 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732649073674 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506696149303 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142691547235 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360118514001 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.