In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
In the future, I do agree that people will go to shopping mall just for entertainment, not to shop. Otherwise, I still strongly believe shopping is an action when you have to buy things you need or want.
In the shopping mall, they have cinemas, restaurant, game station, etc. People coming there mabe not to shop, but enjoy the moments they have created with their friends, mostly teenagers. Such as watching a movie, having meals, spending time playing games with each other,… you don’t need to think twice about the next place where you should go for entertaining. Beside that, mall also have a better view than outside, you can easily take some pretty pictures. There is cool atmosphere since it has air-conditioners. When the weather that day like, extremely hot, you can come inside the mall to avoid the heat.
In spite of that, the elderly and middle-age suppose that going to the mall is for shopping. That’s the duty of it. When people was building the mall, their purpose is for the locals buying necessary things under one roof, they don’t have to worry the “can’t find a place to buy” problem. Because inside it include plenty of shops with different products and labels. You may have multiple choices for which you want to spend money. Plus, at the mall you can try on clothes and get advice on products from assistants.
To conclude, shopping malls are made for both entertaining and buying. So whatever it is, it still for people’s benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...nding time playing games with each other,… you don’t need to think twice about the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81496062992 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49246182012 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8755387895 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4375 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370623196078 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126566519725 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120723925451 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274607818951 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892409340409 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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