In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the years, the shopping mall has become more than just a place to shop for goods and services. It has evolved into a hub for entertainment, leisure, and social interaction. With the increasing convenience of online shopping, some people have started to question the relevance of physical shopping. However, I strongly believe that shopping malls will continue to attract people in the future, but the main reason for their visit will be for entertainment rather than shopping.
The primary reason for this is that shopping malls offer a wide range of entertainment options that cater to different interests and age groups. For instance, shopping malls have movie theaters, arcades, amusement parks, and bowling alleys, which provide a unique experience for individuals and families alike. Additionally, some malls have introduced innovative features like escape rooms, trampoline parks, and virtual reality games, which further enhance the entertainment value of malls.
Another reason why people will continue to visit malls for entertainment is that shopping is no longer a necessity for most people. With the rise of e-commerce platforms, people can easily purchase goods and services online from the comfort of their homes. Thus, shopping has become more of a recreational activity, rather than a mandatory task. As a result, malls have had to adapt to this change in consumer behavior by providing more entertainment options to attract visitors.
Furthermore, shopping malls have become a popular destination for social gatherings, events, and experiences. For example, some malls host concerts, fashion shows, and food festivals, which draw in large crowds. In addition, malls have become popular venues for community events like book clubs, fitness classes, and charity drives, which foster a sense of community among visitors.
In conclusion, I agree that the main reason for going to the shopping mall in the future will be for entertainment, not to shop. This is because shopping malls offer a diverse range of entertainment options, shopping is no longer a necessity, and malls have become a popular destination for social gatherings and events. Therefore, shopping malls will continue to play a vital role in the social and entertainment landscape of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42535211268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88629456058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0592421996 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.294117647 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511205086842 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195575453318 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177797981914 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325832478436 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137805714033 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.