In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that on the horizon more people opt to go on an overseas holiday instead of a domestic one. According to several reasons like the advent of Social Media, I completely disagree with this notion.
People have an undisguised curiosity to explore the far-flung area, but a plethora of factors affect their decisions. In fact, with technology advances and the advent of smartphones and vice versa with the wide range of apps they have, people get a fantastic chance to obtain massive information about destinations where they may not have thought of before. Then, It seems that the technology will meaningfully stimulate human curiosity to go far and far and choose foreign countries as would-be holiday destinations.
In addition, although some people argue about economic recession and the deterioration of it in near future, I strongly believe that it is not all about money. There are a variety of means of transport which are geared to today's modern life; in other words, both cruising and hijacking are the ways of travelling. As a result, the number of run-of-the-mill but “proactive” and “motivated” people - who are visiting a host of countries by riding or even hiking, and enjoying the beauty of a variety of townscapes - has magnificently been increasing. The point is they do not let “Money is tight” put them off travelling.
In conclusion, besides many people say that in future in terms of holiday it is not in favor of foreign one and people tend to travel more inside their country, I immensely disagree with this idea because of the reasons I mentioned above, especially attributable to the integral part of social media in human decisions to find new and far holiday resorts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9965034965 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95803785366 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3086096302 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.9 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268209790177 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872487146955 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834925494967 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151678545548 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660022936849 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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