In many countries paying for things, using a mobile phone (cellphone apps) is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In numerous countries, purchase-related activities like paying for stuff, using a variety of mobile applications are overwhelmingly becoming convenient. While I understand the drawbacks of this phenomenon, I believe that in this topic advantages outweigh drawbacks.
To begin with, when it comes to utilizing smartphones’ options, it reminds many senior citizenships who have severe difficulties with using the high-tech devices. According to the ILO’s report (International Labor Organization), 70 per cent of elderly people tend to set up their own retail stores and be occupied with their small businesses (such as local supermarkets). But the point is: due to the other survey (also carried out by ILO), 80 per cent of people over 65 has a trivial literacy in using smartphones (which are used for paying). As this age group comprise about 60 per cent of world population, expansion in using mobile apps seems to be a drawback at least for a large number of people around the world, who in the one hand are not familiar with using apps, and on the other hand, would like to spend their pension time with customers and talk about price changes and so on.
In spite of the fact I mentioned above, I believe that developing in using mobile apps for paying money has a host of advantages. First of all, it considerably shrinks the pickpocket, because there is no money in the pocket anymore for rubbering and phones all has strict security to open. To add on, people used to forget to take their wallets, but today finding someone who forget their phones is rare to happen. Obviously, cell phone is becoming a versatile devise among people and easy to use today for more different generation of people. Based on an article in Technology and People magazine, 80 per cent of individuals would like to learn how to use smart devices. Therefore, it seems that using apps would not remain as a problem for people any more.
To conclude, Nowadays, using mobile apps for paying for stuff is becoming common. Although there are some drawbacks for this subject, I personally believe that virtues outweigh disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, at least, such as, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97457627119 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83060573601 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6120594606 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.461538462 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295580818838 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108597495413 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887004225613 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196448453876 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607774371674 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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