In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
It is said that in the future means of transport like cars and buses will be without any drivers. As far as my knowledge shows, all such vehicles will be driven and controlled by robots, therefore, although, there are many advantages for this issue, I individually believe that the drawbacks of driverless vehicles outweigh the benefits.
Using driverless vehicles has been recently become more convenient than before, … it is anticipated that people using them are the only travellers. The first benefit back to the topic of environmental pollution. Since these vehicles do not burn fossil fuel or gas, they are environment-friendly and greatly accepted by many environment conservation corps. In addition, the other positive point is while using driverless means is expanding, the number of road accidents based on fatigue or drowsiness of drivers will be gradually eliminated.
However, I strongly believe that never could man-made machines and systems replace humans themselves. Mishaps and flaws of robots are not comparable to human errors. Robots are prepared or even planned for real world which is full of unpredictable incidents. Furthermore, at least in near future these vehicles will not cost-effective and obviously, all people cannot afford to pay for such unreliable systems.
In conclusion, there is a common idea which said that in future all vehicles will be without drivers and people in them will be only passengers, but in spite of many advantages that this phenomenon has, my personal view is the drawbacks of driverless means outweigh the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03002574246 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5793505327 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348853413168 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109799937083 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104797811018 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219683098186 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923183657567 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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