In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s modern world, it is believed that printed newspapers as well as written books will soon lose their position due to the proliferation of the Internet in which people can get access to everything freely. From my point of view, however, I am of the opinion that books and newspapers will never be superseded for their pivotal roles.
The first thing to notice is that the printed newspapers are a more reliable and official source of a myriad of information, which can never be copied by the Internet. To print and publish the issues, the papers need several checking, combining and sorting out the news, which can provide higher accuracy in the knowledge. Take Tien Phong magazine or New York Times as an example, readers can always put trust on them without doubting the rumours or the truth behind the news. Moreover, with the governmental subsidy, numerous newspaper towns can invest in the knowledge and serve the best quality of the information, unlike the Internet with a barrage of unreliable contents.
Another thing worth considering is that no matter how many e-books a person can have freely, they will never undergo the satisfaction and the sense of being the first to the exclusive story of the authors as when they hold a tangible book. If the readers keep gluing their eyes to the phone screen, computer screen and the like for reading, their feeling of content and the pleasure of getting to every page can be curtailed and taken away. As a result, the incentives for reading disappear and there will be no joy in this valuable activity. Nevertheless, readers may have to prolong the time waiting for the book to be published online as not every author posts their outcome on the Internet, not to say some even charge it with the e-readers.
In conclusion, although the ubiquitous use of the Internet has underpinned people’s getting access to different sources to a greater or lesser extent, I am convinced that books and printed newspapers will never have to relinquish their place as they provide better experience with reading and acknowledging, more reliable news and manifold ways of reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers need several checking, combining and sorting out the news, which can provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, another thing, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94166666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65601896236 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0050220565 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.727272727 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7272727273 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235159688663 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912322163303 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559630028608 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147692051991 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411378696491 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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