Gaming has become a popular e-sport and has been included in some regional and international sports events. Some people advocate this, claiming that there is almost no risk of injury with e-sports; others are worried tha he increasing popularity of competitive gaming tournaments may exacerbate video game addiction among young people.
Write an essay of about 250 words to present your opinion on this essay. Give reasons and specific examples to support your position.
As gaming is gaining more and more popularity, some nations have included it in many big sports events and youngsters take up the majority of participants. To a certain extent, I agree that this e-sport proves to be beneficial for them; however, there are also some downsides to it.
On the one hand, joining in gaming tournaments bring no injuries to the young, which is an obvious advantage to other kinds of sports. While sports requiring whole body movements, for example, football and basketball, can easily lead to physical damage, in the e-sport world, game matches are played under the guarantee that no injuries are caused. With this in mind, youngsters can take great pleasure in playing games without any fear of getting hurt, thereby increasing the amount of joy. In addition to this entertaining side of this, gaming can be a big business. That is, unemployed people with children can get a job to support ther family, thus reducing the burden on the governments' budgets.
On the other hand, encouraging the organization of gaming competitions may worsen young people's video game addiction. After all, if one wants to get better at gaming to compete in a tournament, he has to practise regularly, which means playing games a lot, thereby running a risk of becoming an addict. Due to the fact that they spend a lot of time on video games, one of the consequences followed will be health problems, both physically and mentally. They may suffer from short-sightedness or depression. Besides, their performance at school will decrease, resulting in other matters.
All in all, there is no denying that gaming is an entertaining and profitable e-sport but we cannot ignore the hamrful impacts associated with it.
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- Gaming has become a popular e sport and has been included in some regional and international sports events Some people advocate this claiming that there is almost no risk of injury with e sports others are worried tha he increasing popularity of competiti 84
- Gaming has become a popular e sport and has been included in some regional and international sports events Some people advocate this claiming that there is almost no risk of injury with e sports others are worried tha he increasing popularity of competiti 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ithout any fear of getting hurt, thereby increasing the amount of joy. In additio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, after all, as to, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02787456446 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84068515737 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9196187706 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284022421855 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870015864077 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553261930256 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161452194868 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495658067711 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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