Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views regarding the functions of music in today’s world. Although some regard music as just an entertainment form, I agree that it affects the modern society to a greater extent.
On the one hand, it is plausible why music is considered to be a kind of entertainment solely. The main justifications for this are music’s original primary purpose and the fact that the audiences are now mostly interested in the songs’ melodies rather than their content. Thus, songwriters now tend to focus more on polishing the format than the subject while composing music. For example, pop artists are currently churning out pieces of music with captivating melodies and catchy lyrics since such factors are what really entertain listeners and commonly choose love-hate relationships as their topics.
On the other hand, I would argue that other than being a sort of entertainment, music also has other uses in the current world. Firstly, music can transmit feelings and emotions to the audience and hence either hype up their mood or reshape their outlook on issues in life. A perfect instance for this is the national anthems, which serve to boost the soldiers’ spirit in the defense of their countries, both in the past and even at present. Moreover, music provides employment for millions of people. In particular, music itself makes up a big industry that makes a significant the economic growth of a nation. In other words, without music, the society would suffer from an indispensable loss.
In conclusion, I believe music does not only provide entertainment but it also serves as a tool for conveying sentiments and economic support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, sort of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81345410947 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6940950258 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268247827977 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967689204145 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542520163992 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168659881317 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545999607108 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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